Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
We are in the era of generation fourth industrial revolution, which is based on revolutionary technological advancemnet. Development of technology has certainly impacted our daily life including the way we communicate. I am completely conviced that with changing world, we should leave old methods behind and adapt ourselves to new ways of communication.
Firstly,In the past, letters were used for personal communication. For instance, to send invitaion to friends & family, apprising family of your current status and day to day activities, send a apology letter to wife etc. In today's world, the same communcation can be done using different channel. For instance, one can use e-mail, mobile phones, instant messaging apps, social media as communication channel to communicate with friends and family.
Secondly, in the past, letters were used for official communication to report to manager, lodge a request or complaint to different departments etc. Now almost all over the world, official communication is through electronic medium.
Using modern communication has various advantages. First and foremost, guaranteed delivery. Email reaches to recipent immediately and sender gets an acknowledgentment immediately. Secondaly, its cost effective as there is no stamp duty need to be paid as most of the modern tools used for communication are free of cost. Thirdly, communication is fast and takes same time to deliver across the world where as in traditional letter world, time to deliver to letter was dependent upon distance. Finally, electronic medium is enviornment friendly. To write a letter, one need to use paper for which raw material is tree. The more we will use electronic medium, the less tree will be cut to eventually save enviornment.
Letter is definaltely a better way to personalize a feeling and perhaps better way to convey not only messages but also to build relationship. However, one can use emojis to replicate the sam emotions and feelsings using modern tools. I certainly believe, this is time for us to move on and contribute to make a better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tamp duty need to be paid as most of the modern tools used for communication are ...
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Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Line 4, column 658, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The more we will use electronic medium, the less tree will be cut to eventually ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34042553191 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18866363193 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613981762918 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3164129323 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.85 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130929089469 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378913810713 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326338227914 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067694252946 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253266214816 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.