In some countries, older people who retire from work spend the money on themselves (e.g. holiday) rather than save money for their children. Is this a positive or negative development?
In modern era, elderly people of some nations spend their retirement funds on themselves on holidays instead keeping money for their offsprings. This is a positive change and this essay will discuss about it in upcoming paragraphs.
In the past almost all parents saved their lifetime money for their children. Throughout their working life they sacrificed and after retirement when they could enjoy life, travel around but could not do that as they had already given their money to kids. In details, after working thirty-fourty years in life one has to give birth to their children, upbring them, and pay for their education and when that person has fulfilled his all duties he has a right to enjoy his life by travelling and exploring different places, spending money on healthcare.
Another good point is that it also makes young people more responsible for themselves. For instance, when young adults know that their parents had done a lot for them and now this is their own duty to work and survive. Their parents will not help them every time that message keeps them more alert and motivated to achieve more in life.
Final point is, pensioners have their own money which they spend on themselve in that case they may not become a financial burdun on governments. Because governments have to take a good care of their elderly citizens so that governments have to allocate huge amount of money for it.
In conclusion, if retirees spend money for themselves for their relaxation and enjoyment which may make their life happy which will be good for an individual and at a society level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... had already given their money to kids. In details, after working thirty-fourty ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88929889299 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47652889224 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553505535055 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6992615438 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342676144774 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14615076742 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854747610669 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20609881879 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775599257227 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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