Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People often argue that now films can be watched on phones or tablets instead of going to cinemas while others believe it can only be fully enjoyed while watching it only in a cinema. Films can be watched on phone or tablets or in cinema.

Everyone loves to watch a movie and what’s better than watching it at any time or at any place. Thanks to the advanced technology, Phone and tablet are getting bigger and smarter. People love to watch movies on their phone or on the tablets especially when they are home or traveling. For instance, buying a Netflix membership for $9 a month.one can stream or download thousands of movies and seasons anywhere anytime instead of going to a cinema one don’t have to pay each time while streaming the movie or even pause it any time and resume it later.

While other people believe movies can only be fully enjoyed on big screens with high-quality sound and unmatchable graphics which are only possible in cinemas. For example, the Jurassic world was released in 3D which made dinosaur look realistic. Moreover, film producers invest lots of money to create these effects for the audience. Therefore, it is expected from the audience to appreciate their work. Going to the cinema also gives you a chance to meet up with your friends and enjoy it together.

To recapitulate, it would be unfair to take support one side. Both sides have its own advantages and one can enjoy it on both inventions of entertainment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8023715415 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56905442124 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.336337704 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4615384615 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270800781376 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102106566534 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115068813587 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172019845587 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119986854058 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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