Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give own opinion.
Does the responsibility of environment protection belong to the
government and the political leaders alone? Apparently, while many a
man argues that the government has been chosen by the people to take
effective decisions towards the environmental conservation, another
school of thoughts believe that for the environmental indemnity and its
sustainable development, it is the accumulative duty of the human
society at large to initiate protective steps.
Arguably, the global leaders of the big nations have not taken the
initiative to safeguard the ecosystem for no reason. Apart from signing
the international treaties regarding the safety of the biodiversity, the
majority of the countries have added laws, codes and acts in their
constitution to ensure the protection of the natural habitats in their
nation. For example, the government of India implemented the E-waste
Management Rules 2016, under these rules, incentives would be
provided to promote the recycling of e-waste and ensure 100% collection.
The recycling centres will be registered to ensure safe practices of
recycling and disposal.
Notwithstanding this, opponents opine that it is the collective
responsibility of the community at large to recognize their personal
duty to contribute to the preservation of the environment. Since it’s
impossible for the government to be present simultaneously at every
problematic area, therefore, it is the duty of the general public to take the
initiate within their potential to safeguard the natural environment.
Many times, certain citizens have made efforts, which have presented
greater results regarding the preservation of natural habitats and
resources. For instances, the Chipko Movement was an initiative taken
by the women of the villages in Uttarakhand, where to decrease the
deforestation, its adverse environmental effects, and also protecting
the natural resources like coal, the villagers were encouraged to hug
the trees tightly. This hindered the industrial corporations to cut down
the trees. Moreover, the forest got preserved with the intervention of
the government after the display of the strong public agitation against
clearing out the forests for industrial set up in that area.
According to my opinion, it is the ideal efforts by both the citizens and
the government that would sustain the health of the ecosystem. While
the government cannot monitor accurately each and every region and
problems, especially in a big nation like India, it is the moral duty of
the public to make the government aware of the alarming
environmental issues and the urgency to take appropriate steps to curb
and cure it. On the other hand, efforts by the public would go in vain if the
government does not take strict actions against environmental
degradation and owing to this, it is the responsibility of the elected
leaders to implement strong laws for preserving the ecological sphere
and to punish the offenders, which would set an example for the
society. For instance, the Government of India launched the program
called Green Skill Development Program; the main aim of this initiative
was to develop the skills within the youth which would be beneficial for
the preservation of the environment for the sustainable future under the
forest sector. No sooner did this program get launch, than the 2.25
people got employed and the efforts for the restoration of flora and
fauna increased incredibly because the manpower in the forest sector
got higher.
To conclude, the but for the better results for the safety of bio-
diversity in the current scenario, it is important for the human beings
to realize that they owe a lot to the mother nature and without
thinking about the geographical boundaries and political relationships,
every country, big or small, and world organizations must join hands
for the safety of the environment. However, the cordial efforts of both
government and public are essential for the protection of the ecological
balance at both ground level, as well as on the higher level, it would
eventually lead to a socially stable and environmentally prosperous
society, lest the good outcomes should be far out of reach
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'painstaking research'.
Suggestion: painstaking research
...s from being polluted. For instance, in a painstaking research by Harvard University, it was revealed ...
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Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... In my opinion, the government and the general public must work hand in glove with each other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06203473945 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09417241344 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508684863524 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7194543105 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.454545455 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6363636364 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288719190432 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125550209679 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595303892637 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170121650954 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344735578525 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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