Today people are travelling more than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
It is argued that increasing number of people are travelling other places as compared to past. This essay will argue that good salaries and cheaper airfares are the reasons behind this change, and tourists get the chance to explore the world.
The principle enabler behind this trend is that people can now afford to travel to various places. This is due to the fact that people are getting higher remuneration than in the past and have a higher spending capacity. In addition, the decreased flight prices are also contributing to this change because even a middle-class person can easily pay such a lesser amount. For instance, the recent study done by the Oxford University revealed that there had been an average 77% increase in the salaries since the last decade. The same study stated that now more people prefer to travel by flights due to the increment in the salary structures.
The advantages of this trend to the travellers are learning a new culture, language and exploring scenic beauty. This is to say that when people visit a new places, then they often interact with the local communities and get to understand their culture such as how to greet each other. They also learn a local language while staying within that area and during exploring the tourist attractions. As a result, tourists often capture many memories which stay with them forever and act as the most precious possessions. For instance, as per the recent survey done by The Times magazine, 72% of the respondents agreed that they need a break from their monotonous routine and would like to travel a new place to experience a different life.
In conclusion, the large number of people can now afford to travel than in the past because of the rise in the salaries and inexpensive flights. Furthermore, this is a pragmatic shift which enables a tourist to learn a new culture, language and experience new place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
... is to say that when people visit a new places, then they often interact with the loca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55966574704 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7869181152 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243976106467 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912507656443 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071954321861 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156564392565 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03401817812 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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