In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.
Men and women earn big incomes in some nations. Many people argue that making a good amount of salary is better for a country, while, there are others who suggest that administration should maintain limitations to one's wages. This essay will discuss both views and provide evidence as to why every person deserves high incomes for a good lifestyle.
On the one hand, limiting salaries would mean that a person will not spend money on luxurious things. Due to this, common man will maintain a budget and manage his expenses. Due to this, people will start compromising on many things and kill their own wants and desires by restricting their spendings. For instance, many offices in Tamil Nadu give a limited income to its employees because of which, the people working in such offices try to save every penny earned for their families and themselves leading to poor living conditions as they do not spend on many utilities.
Conversely, when high incomes are given to working class people, the nation becomes better. Since employers are given big salaries, they tend towards a better lifestyle and a good standard of living, resulting in the development of the country thereby eradicating poverty levels. For example, USA is treated as first world nation because people earn high salaries and pay taxes. In short, taxes leads to progression of the nation because of better infrastructure provided by the government.
To conclude, paying low or high incomes to people has its own positive and negative views, but in my opinion, it is best for a country if people are rewarded with big amount of salaries for their hard work as they deserve to spend a better and a luxurious life which in turn is better for the country as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87898089172 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57377651136 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7757088121 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324700320695 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108975988394 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830406535407 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209255047032 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805163907005 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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