Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, abortion has been considered as one of the risk mitgation strategy for family planning. However, society has been debating for and against abortion since medical science enabled human to have it as an option.
Having a child is a big decision for any family. It's extremely important for the future of child that she should be brought to the world only when parent can ensure a good future. In case when couple was not planning to have a child, and woman concieve accidently, abortion can be used as a tool to deal with unplanned situation. Secondly, with advancement of medical science, it is possible to know heath of the child in womb. In case of abnormality, abortion can be seen as option which can help to avoid unwarranted pain to the child and family. Sometimes, mother's life is at risk becuase of pregrancy and abortion can be used to save her life.
On the other hand, people also think abortion as unnatural man made event and human's interfrence to the nature. concieving a child is a natural phenomenon and one should not play with it. In addition, in some religion this is strictly proibited. Sometimes, in developing nation, abortion is used as a tool to get rid of child of specific gender. This leads to gender inequality and induce serious issues into the society. For example, if there is imbalance in gender ratio then there will not be enough girls in society for marriage and crime against women will increase.
Finally, i believe that abortion is a tool which as a citizen we should use responsbily. As an individual or as a couple one should see pros and cons of opting for abortion and take decision in favor of betterment of family and society as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Concieving
...t and humans interfrence to the nature. concieving a child is a natural phenomenon and one...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... against women will increase. Finally, i believe that abortion is a tool which a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68791946309 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61434379487 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2669329124 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170846829836 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574348437195 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321536768817 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113906535199 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149464206183 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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