Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past?
To succeed in life people need to be sharp at various techniques, among those, reading and writting are the most important. The issue at hand is many people say the ability to read and write is more important today than in the pást, as my concerned, I totally agree with this opinion. To support, I will evaluate the role of those skills in people’s daily life, the role of those skills in enhancing people's life quality and the opportunities to get sharpen those skills in this present time compare to the past.
First, in the present time, reading and writting skills play a very important role in people’s daily activities. Most of things are written down in letters and numbers called languge. In studying, in work, and even in entertaining, people always use the ability to read and write those papers to finish their jobs. The small children do their classwork and homework with the basic letters and numbers. The adults accomplish their job with tons of documents, papers, numbers. Even the people playing games still need to read the instruction, the rules of game, and write down the results of the game. And the sharper people at ability to read and write, the faster they reach their target. On the contrary, the people in the past did most their job by hand, and things are presented through symbols and pictures not the language, so they đi not use much the reading and writting skills like present people. Because of that, I think that ability to read and write play a more important role today than in the past.
Second, today, expert at reading and writting brings great chances for people to improve their life quality. A professor who has advanced those skills are paid higher than a worker who has basic those skills. Because of this fact, people who want to enhanced their quality of life have to enhanced their ability to read and write first. Looking back in the past, most of people did not care much about learn how to read and write and they also did not consider ability to read and write as a option to better their life. Base on this argument, I strongly support the opinion that reading and writing skills are more essential in the present than in the past.
Last but not least, compare to the past, people today have more opportunities to learn, practice and sharpen their ability to read and write. In the past, learning how to read and write was a special rights of the wealthy people. However, today, every single person has the right to learn reading and writing. For example, most the children at six years old are taught to read the simple books and to write the simple sentences. Youth and adults have a lot of choices where to study among a vast of schools, institutions, learning centers, etc. Thus, I firmly assist that, today people value the role of reading and writing more than in the past.
In conclusion, it is normal to exist gaps between the different periods of time because of nonstop development in all the sections of human life. Take the consideration about the ability to read and write, I completely agree with the opinion that reading and writing ability is more important today than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the things') or simply say ''Most things''.
Suggestion: Most of the things; Most things
...role in people's daily activities. Most of things are written down in letters and numbers...
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Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... write first. Looking back in the past, most of people did not care much about learn how to re...
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Line 4, column 490, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t consider ability to read and write as a option to better their life. Base on th...
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Line 4, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng and writing skills are more essential in the present than in the past. Last b...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to read'.
Suggestion: to read
...ry single person has the right to learn reading and writing. For example, most the chil...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more important today than in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 96.0 52.1666666667 184% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 557.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69658886894 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34087215555 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411131059246 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.0 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9146624085 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.64 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.28 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507387332388 0.236089414692 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182001427451 0.076458572812 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194200679934 0.0737576698707 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368537171196 0.150856017488 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925213532953 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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