Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to plan and organize.
In this highly competitive society, the ability to plan and organize plays an increasingly essential role, which enables people to quickly master the knowledge, motivate people when they are depressed, and eventually succeed. Therefore, for young people, it is crucial to foster the ability to make plans and organize other people in teamwork.
To begin with, modern life is complicated and thus plans can provide us with a right direction to the success. A plan usually includes what we should learn first, when, and how to manage the knowledge. Without fully planning all the things, it is easy to be lost in this modern world, having no idea what to do next. For example, in a mobile phone company, the newly employed engineers need to participate in the projects, but most projects are unfamiliar to those; thus, in order to get involved in the team, making plans about learning the new technology and new programs is extremely important. For a team, a plan also contributes to higher effenciency. All members shall attend the meeting according to the timetable in the plan, which results in more time spent on the discussion about the project.
In addition, the ability to organize also gives rise to a wonderful team where all members can share ideas and work together effectively. To organize other people doesn't necessarily mean that all people have to listen to only one leader, but all members can be treated equally and be respected in a discussion. For instance, if a leader doesn't allow his team members to show different ideas, then the members will not devote themselves to the work and may idle away time because their ideas are not respected. And in this way teamwork will finally be damaged. Accordingly, organizing other people is quite essential in the team.
Besides, modern life comprises numerous fields and a great deal of knowledge. Plans give people the light in the dark, encourage those who feel desperate and lost, and then assist them in fulfilling their dreams. Without the clear plans, it is possible that one may be diffident and afraid when encountering difficulites. According to a survey by Peking University, students who make plans once a month have high possilibities than those who hardly plan their time in finding a satisfactory job. It is acceptable that one may feel beated and disappointed when failure comes due to lack of knowledge and experience; however, those emotions are not permanent and once we make clear and reasonable plans, all these difficulties will disappear finally.
In conclusion, while modern life may perplex us when we face a great deal of knowledge, no one should yield to those difficulties, and instead everyone should bear in mind that the ablity to plan and organize will offer them more courage and bravery and they can be easily overcome all the difficulties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00421940928 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71873733486 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5777069471 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.842105263 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9473684211 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.89473684211 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228409059449 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739520487936 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542000501684 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127216945626 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534028711704 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.