boys and girls
In the past, sexism against girls is very serious. Girls just need to do housework so they don’t have to go to school, but later girls also were slowly began to study gaining the right of education, but because of discrimination, boys and girls go to separate schools. But with the reduction of gender discrimination, mixed schools are a better choice for children.
Co-education is conducive to the improvement of personality. Generally speaking, men and women have different ways of thinking, and we can accept and understand some of their suggestions. According to some data, boys' mode of thinking is more samplesimple, while girls' mode of thinking is usually unrestrained and imaginative. In the past, some girls felt uncomfortable about contacting the opposite sex, but these are things we must face in the future, so we should contact the opposite sex and know each other from childhood.
Many people in the past thought that girls must be gentle, and boys should be energetic; girls are better at liberal arts and boys are better at science. But this is just a restricted way of thinking. Girls can also study science and boys can also study liberal arts. It is also very important to learn both Chinese and math. If boys and girls go to the same school, even if they are good at different things and have different personalities, students can complement each other, and now many girls like sports and they can also be cool. We should not be bound by the rigid thinking of previous people.
Lastly, as we all know, discrimination against women is very serious. In the beginning, it was also because of prejudice against women. If boys and girls are educated in the same school and under the same roof, there is little room for discrimination. This is because they can understand and interact with each other in various environments, to appreciate each other. Now in our school with boys and girls, gender sexism rarely occurs, so this is also proof of the increasing power of girls over the years.
In conclusion, I disagree with Boys and Girls should go to separate schools because first, it is helpful for the opposite sex to know each other. Second, give play to our nature and do what we are good at. Third, reduced discrimination. At first, male and female schools were divided because of discrimination, but now boys and girls should have the same equal education.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-08-02 | ayumiyazaki | 70 | view |
| 2022-08-02 | ayumiyazaki | 66 | view |
| 2022-07-20 | ayumiyazaki | 70 | view |
| 2022-07-20 | ayumiyazaki | 90 | view |
| 2022-07-20 | ayumiyazaki | 60 | view |
- Dinosaurs 68
- In this age of intensive media coverage it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero 66
- boys and girls 66
- the Chaco Canyon 3
- Do you agree or disagree Educating young people about healthy food is important and should not be the job of family alone It should also be the responsibility of schools to teacher their students about healthy learning 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...chool, but later girls also were slowly began to study gaining the right of educatio...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er girls also were slowly began to study gaining the right of education, but beca...
^^
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys and girls go to separate schools. But with the reduction of gender discriminat...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, so, third, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86764705882 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76856218331 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455882352941 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5293157943 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417287596519 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125086686546 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137184763168 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272841727415 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075733053343 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.