Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
It is an undeniable fact that prosperous is one of the vital elements in everyone's life. All around the world, the modern way of living has affected people's attitude regarding their lives. In this regard, some people are of the opinion that due to the complexity of modern life, the young generation has to be organized, and has the capability to make a plan. I personally agree with this view owing to some reasons.
The first reason worth mentioning is that the young generation by planning can anticipate the potential barrier and problem within this complicated world. That is to say, nowadays, young people can frequently face obstacles in their occupations by which they can lose their jobs or other situations. In order to gain the ability to cope with those obstacles, the young generation has to have plans. Indeed, they should foresee the complicated issues before their occurrence. To put this notion into a more vivid picture, now, because of the unpredictable economic situation of the world, which is due to the complex financial systems of the countries, young people have to save an adequate amount of money and keep it for emergencies. For instance, many years ago, I had the desire to study abroad. However, I did not have a suitable plan for the future of my education life. Thus, I only studied hard to achieve the best scores, and I did not try to anticipate the possible problems that could happen. After five years, I was ready to apply, but the university fees had become extremely expensive that I was not able to afford them with the money that I had. Indeed, if I had particular plans for my future, I could have been able to predict these monetary problems and save the right amount of money for my future. Therefore, in this modern life, the more young generation has plans for their future, the more they can conveniently cope with the unpredictable problem.
Furthermore, being organized, young people can exclusively focus their attention on their goals. To be more specific, the complexity of modern life sometimes creates situations that can simply destroy young people' concentration in the long run. This colourful modern life has an extreme ability to deceive people, and especially young people, to change their route in their lives. It goes without saying that changing routes lead the young generation to fail and makes their goals unreachable. In order to avoid this incident, the youth has to be organized. As a matter of fact, being organized offers them a series of tasks that they have to follow in a special amount of time. In this way, they always are aware of what they have to do and what they can not do. This organized people who do not have time to change their mind or pay attention to the everyday varying modern life, consistently stay focused on their own task. To clarify, in the current modern life, the media presents various career positions as the most profitable and desirable ones every day. Nevertheless, for a person who is organized and has a particular plan, these days by day changing of desires can not affect the route which is trying to pursue. Hence, having an organized plan can help people to avoid being deceived by modern life’s offers.
In conclusion, the young generation should be organized and has plans owing to the features of modern life. Because not only do these approaches help to predict the potential obstacles, but also they help young people to stay focused.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2863.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 592.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83614864865 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59819866433 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 909.9 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.614835852 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338442941359 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965793986241 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643097192453 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224800255373 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192126047264 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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