Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is an incontrovertible fact that in today's world, life is of great complexity. With this in mind, some special abilities in order to live comfortable and prosperous life are necessary. I, personally, do believe that such abilities have some benefits for us, three of which are elaborated below.
To begin with, the economy is a major part of people's lives, which play an important role in their success. Needless to say that individuals have to compete with great rivals to make money. Hardly can be guaranteed a person success without management his or her expenses even with a decent job. Therefore, of so great influence are these abilities that everybody should pay attention to them. Many a big company, for example, by using some special strategies and investing their money in appropriate ways are more likely to reach their apex efficiency. Accordingly, having a plan and an excellent organization they can pave the way towards their success and reach the zenith of "Flourish Mountain."
Additionally, by technology, an integral part of today's life, people's relationship can be affected spectacularly. In this regard, people should be able to manage their communication by having a schedule. Strange as it may seem, social media--such as Facebook, Twitter, to name but a few--can have a deep influence on individuals' happiness and sadness. For instance, the more time people spend on social media, the more they tend to cause a damage to their family relationship, friendship, emotions, to name but a handful. As a result, they need to manage time in order to live a happy and peaceful life. Without awareness and planning, these relationships are more likely to culminate in friction.
Last but not least, people have a hectic lifestyle, which is a result of societies' development. Thus, it is really crucial for human beings to control stress and anxiety -which can have a bad consequence in terms of psychological effects - to be more healthful. Having no plan, individuals will meet a "disaster" in their lives. Consequently, people need to be more careful about making decisions as to diet, sleeping hour, and play sports. Unfortunately, the absence of healthy lifestyle is a missing link in today's societies, which threatens even next generation.
In the light of these essential aspects of life, I am of the opinion that planning and organization have a great impact on human beings' ways of living. Such a vital abilities not only can improve our welfare, but also tend to affect our relationship and health remarkably. As a result, paying attention to them should be one of our first priorities in order to reach success and prosperity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...but a few--can have a deep influence on individuals happiness and sadness. For instance, th...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
...cial media, the more they tend to cause a damage to their family relationship, friendshi...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Having no plan, individuals will meet a 'disaster' in their lives. Co...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'ability'?
Suggestion: ability
...man beings ways of living. Such a vital abilities not only can improve our welfare, but a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13926940639 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12995327938 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1452716159 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.318181818 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14992402637 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464218223566 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312162710002 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092348689535 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258522242872 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.