Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have them care for animals.
It is often argued that a very crucial fact responsibility can be taught to the children by taking care of an animal. I truly believe that this way will definitely turn them into responsible human being to some extent but there could be other ways to impart the sense of responsibility.
Children will look after a pet will develop a great understanding of how to nurture it. Children when watch the parents feed pets time to time will show how feeding and following a precise paradigm is very important. This will teach them to take accountability of another life and by teaching practice worth learning.
Additionally, taking care of a pet is conducive to children’s physical mental health . It is evident that training a pet requires lots of physical activities. For instance, training the dof and encouraging children to go out for a walk regularly with it. As a result, a child would be more aware of his or physical well-being. For example, when I was young, I raised the dog as a pet. Everyday I came home from my school, my dog would always run to me and give me a warm hug and this would leave me with no other option but to take him for a walk to play with him. This all help me to learn responsibility towards other lives and how to be harmonious in life.
However, there might be some other practical ways which can be used to teach children to impart the responsibility factor. One of this would be helping the parents in their house and chores, cleaning, dusting and helping with the basics of cooking to name a few. Other than this, volunteering in community welfare projects and also imbibe the factor of responsibility. A relevant example of this would be my niece who recently helped farmers in the worldwide protest going on in India by giving them free meals for few days. This taught her a sense of responsibility towards society by being compassionate and helpful.
To sum up, I believe that each responsibility children can be done by showing them how to nurture affect but other factors such as community services and learn basic life might also be taken into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67654986523 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80914235736 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530997304582 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2028989228 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3888888889 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200454116947 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662599199036 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461646457492 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111225464489 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285495674463 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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