Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should make it possible for all children to attend preschool (early childhood education programs, for example for three-year-old children) at no cost to the children's families.
It is often said that education needs to be focused on by all people, and many governments have proposals to enhance children's education. Generally speaking, if governments can send all children to the preschool at no cost to their families, it will be a good circumstance for everyone.
First and foremost, as far as social improvement is concerned, preschool can be a good catalyst for society, which wants to be transformed into a fair, enhanced, and wonderful. For society, the more people get educated, the better the living situation people will have. These days, many countries are suffering from the unfairness of the society class and decreasing of the living conditions, if government can make all families to take their children into the preschool, children in all class can have a chance to explore the world and the families can have more time to build their lives, so it will be a big improvement to the equality of the society.
In addition to social improvement, personal development can also be an important issue as we are taking into account. For children,if in the young ages they can have more ways to get new knowledge, they will be more confident, on the other hand, the preschool can establish the good fundamental for them and they can have a better understanding ability in future life. Take my pen pal Johnson for instance, the city he lives in pushed all the children in the preschool and he was beneficial by the proposal. He got a lot of information about architecture at his young age and eventually, inspiration in childhood made him a good designer to make him come true.
Last but not least, for many people who bother with the matter at all would admit for government, making all children available into the preschool can be a marvellous stress to the financial, but the process can be reversed. I believe that education can be the best investment for individuals, society, and even the country and world. As I mentioned above, good education can bring a brilliant future to everyone, being skilled in childhood can make a person to find his/her niche in future development, and get a good reward in the future,and make more economic output for the whole society spontaneously, in this turn, the whole society can be in a health situation in all aspects, not to just mention the economy. Ironicly, if children are not educated will, there will be more chaos in the economic fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , if
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Suggestion: , and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84578313253 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85052602531 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.404712523 48.9658058833 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.692307692 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9230769231 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262230878678 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118644664104 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722582587827 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203017916618 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488911886397 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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