Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no controversial discussion that human activities alter the face of our planet. In this respect, while some people believe that it's much harder to live, some stand on the other side of the continuum, holding an opinion that human activities do not have an impact on the earth. It is my firm belief that human works made the world an inappropriate environment to grow, and the reasons to substantiate my viewpoints are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, no one can deny the consequences of human activities on people's health. With a tremendous extension of all the industries in different fields, it is much harder for people to breathe correctly. Nowadays, there are several toxic gases that get produced by factories resulting in chronic diseases for individuals. I have to admit my personal experience profoundly influenced my judgment on this matter. Ten years ago, my uncle passed away for critical damage to his lungs caused by all the air pollutions in Tehran. Had it not been because of all the human activities, He would be alive and healthy. This example demonstrates how society widening with all excessive activities can affect an individual's health condition.
Another point that needs to be mentioned is the effect of human activities on all the livings such as animals which their population being declined by people's works. Unfortunately, it is utterly routine among the government's plans to destroy animal habitats by making new urban areas. In addition, these new cities use rivers or sea to get rid of their sewage which is dreadful for animals. For instance, one of the rare Iranian tigers was extinguished fifty years because their habitat got destroyed by human activities, and they didn't have enough resources to survive. This example shows how critical animal situations can be affected by people's unawareness.
In conclusion, it is my strong opinion that with all the impact of human activities, especially on people's health and animal's conditions, the earth is suffering from lots of factors that made it harder to live. It should be noted that it is essential for all people to be much more responsible for the earth as their home planet.
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- Summarize ideas in listening and reading 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 703, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... all excessive activities can affect an individuals health condition. Another point that n...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...destroyed by human activities, and they didnt have enough resources to survive. This ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83276130124 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3157091142 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.823529412 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142528389132 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469540658803 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351835955125 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936112766289 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254907741365 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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