Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's era, having secure jobs and having a successful career are the dreams of every human. Some people believe that many years ago, people can get good jobs straightforward after graduated. I strongly advocate this statement due to the competitive factors of nowadays society, which will decrease people's opportunities of getting a career.
To begin with, in the past, most of the jobs were under the control of the government so that Governments will try their best to offer their citizen a good occupation because both will receive the benefits. Working within the government can let people assured because they will not lose their jobs easily compared to currently. This means that the government will secure every employee to have a good working government, have a good treated and employees do not need to worry about labor exploitation because the government has the rule to work 7 hours a day. Besides that, the salary employees receive will be higher than the salary that an entrepreneur business offers which will provide people with adequate money to supply their living conditions.
Furthermore, times fly, a soaring number of new jobs are created which hardens for people to choose suitable jobs for themselves. However, in the past, people can easily choose the majors and jobs they prefer when they are freshmen. This means that, in the past, humans would have a good aim prior so that they can focus and do their best to achieve good jobs and careers compared to nowadays people; it is hard to do. The statistic shows that many students after graduated do not have jobs to work because business nowadays is hard to get a position.
All things considered, people in the past might get good, secure jobs rather than currently. This means that people should try their best every day if they want to survive in today's harsh life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90734824281 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48900859305 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511182108626 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6224537265 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119025577738 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529243252236 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357041299995 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828649171707 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029464138107 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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