Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
I agree that if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away. Nowadays, the competitions are very radical and many people want to get a secure job for their future.
Firstly, people cannot find the another job as same as this secure job. That is because competitions are very violent in society. Abundant of people want to find a job that can provide a stable salary. If people cannot take this opportunity right away, they would have no chance to get another secure job at the same time. For instance, recently, my roommate and me are finding a job about our graduation field work. I find a job with free dorm and appropriate money, so I as soon as possible sigh a contract with the company. However, my roommate always hesitate and cannot make a decision quickly like me. Then, she miss the time and many companies have enough students to work for them.
Secondly, taking a secure job right away can help people to save time. As we all know, time is the money. If we use a lot of time to find a more satisfying job, we will miss a lot of money at the same time. So, in my opinion, we can take this secure job right away and during the working time, we also can spend time looking for another job with higher salary. This solution can help people not to waste time.
Admittedly, waiting for a job that would be more satisfying is also feasible and we have the chance that get a job with higher salary. In the interview, we need to be smart and confident. However, a long wait can cost people’s enthusiam and energy, so we will have not perfect performance in the interview. We still could not get the job.
In conclusion, I think people have to as soon as possible to catch the opportunity that can provide a secure job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away. Nowadays, the compe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey should take it right away. Nowadays, the competitions are very radical and ma...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'misses'.
Suggestion: misses
...e a decision quickly like me. Then, she miss the time and many companies have enough...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4250764526 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4235932235 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440366972477 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5176874947 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.35 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405757597192 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150336191409 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140613817271 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277111968724 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996292921263 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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