Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
cars have a significant role in people's daily lives in many places where they work or play. some people might say that there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years than there are today, while other people might not. Both sides have their own reasons to support their views. If I had to choose one, I would say that fewer cars will be used in twenty years than today. there are some reasons why I think this way, but the most important reason is as follows to support my view.
To begin with, cars will be replaced by harmless and state-of-the-art transportations. cars emit harmful gases and these gases have a negative impact on the environment. researchers are trying to solve the problem and related research is conducted all over the world. Ultimately, the use of cars will be decreased and other transportation vehicles will be developed, which are harmless to the environment.
- It is important to visit museums in order to learn about a country. 63
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 1977.66487455 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 407.700716846 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73548387097 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69040767252 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 212.727598566 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 618.680645161 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.528993665 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5555555556 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341450984418 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131419563824 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107101888001 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246906245422 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836664160921 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 86.8835125448 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.