Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undisputable that famous people, in every field, have an enormous impact in every person's opinion. Adapt and successful people, like celebrities, are always concerned as virtue of wisdom and success in every individual's life especially youngsters. Some people believe that views of well-known people affects people's opinion; some people are of the opinion that teenagers get more influence in comparison with older people. I, personally, subscribe to the prior one. I will elucidate my most convincing point of views in the following paragraphs.
Older people see this world from another perspective different from younger people.
First and foremost, it is crystal clear that youngsters tend to embody famous people in media rather than those who are mentioned in books or other informative medium. It is believed that people inclined to believe in things that are visualize and easy to be seen. A preponderance of young people spend most of their time watching TV programs and catching news about renowned actors or athletes. As it is predicted, they got the most repercussion and influence from those sources. For instance, I had a friend who was in love with a famous actress in Iran. Not only did she strive to copy his actions and behavior, but also she started to follow her attitudes and principal as her caption of life. On the other hand the old elapse much of their time spending with their families or are busy with their jobs, trying to enhance the quality of their life.
Discussed the issue from above mentioned aspect, I want to cling to the point from another perspective, the brains of the old are improved properly, whereas youngsters are in the way of finding idiosyncrasies and attitude which discrete them from the rest of their peers. In this regard, the only society which seems close to their views are celebrities, as they are notable and elite people, and are concerned as paragon of merit and success in their views. For instance, whenever you ask a young people to talk about their influential characters in their personality, in actuality, they will mention some accomplished and adopt singer, actor, athlete, to name but a few. On contrast, old people take their own experience as the best guide in their life. They prefer to see the world with naked eye, stripped off any adornment and decoration.
All in all, I personally believe that youngsters are more susceptible to get influence from famous people. In my opinion, they are more in touch with media that has undisputed impact in every aspect of our lives. That is, their opinion become affected by the celebrated people. In addition, their brain is in the way of promoting, and they embody famous people as paragon of wisdom and virtue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...field, have an enormous impact in every persons opinion. Adapt and successful people, l...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...s virtue of wisdom and success in every individuals life especially youngsters. Some people...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'visualized'.
Suggestion: visualized
... inclined to believe in things that are visualize and easy to be seen. A preponderance of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97385620915 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65532389082 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3418725946 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.772727273 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20574411971 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619594776618 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437714099701 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13187723075 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448775701662 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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