Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern era occupation is the crucial requirement for thriving the development of individual and community. Work for yourself is the honourable and respectable task for an individual. However, some people think that working the same task all day is increased fatigue to the labour and other people think different work is helpful for relieving the stress and boredom. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming. Among that controversy, I prefer later one which I will elaborate in followings.
First and foremost, a person satisfies of this work when he or she fulfils all the desired objective of that work. It can come from the same task or for the different task it depends on the person. Moreover, focusing on a single work develop a person's deep knowledge, better analysis ability and increase potentiality. For instance, as an electrical engineer, I always focus my career on power electronics because I am interested in that field and also have deepest knowledge. Personally I also focus on other fields like VLSI, communication, control but I observed that it was pretty difficult for me to achieve profound knowledge on that subject. Moreover, different variety of knowledge sometimes confused me with the other basis. Thus, I only concentrate my knowledge on that specific field where I can use my possibility and satisfy with my choice.
Furthermore, switching the career sometimes difficult to adapt and more adept is essential for the phenomena. When a person working on a field after some time he actually adapts with the working environment. But, when switching the work he needs to adapt with other working situation and people which some moment does not work out well. For particular, one of my friends worked for a company as a software engineer. He was doing well in his career and he was fatigued with all the software development program. Moreover, developing algorithms and analyze the perspective of the program he found bored. Therefore, he changed the workplace and now he finds that a new place is not appropriate for him. Thereby, he missed his opportunity to get a better career and his future is now uncertain.
However, people sometimes think that today's world is more technologically develop and every person should skilful with or at least keep the knowledge on different work. But, personally I believe to become skillful in every task is difficult and make to gain deeper knowledge, skill and be honest in individual position which makes a person satisfy.
To recapitulate, boredom or satisfaction depends on a person and it happens when the person is not concentrating on the work it may be a specific work or may be a different kind of work. Confidence in yourself makes the work satisfactory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...over, focusing on a single work develop a persons deep knowledge, better analysis ability...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the deepest'.
Suggestion: have the deepest
... I am interested in that field and also have deepest knowledge. Personally I also focus on o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09846827133 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99088147796 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483588621444 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6127272843 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0416666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108506424869 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332060453431 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349392630725 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631908905247 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154962257677 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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