Do you agree or disagree?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Having knowledge about various things is very important. Personally, I believe that a person should broadly have knowledge about all the academic subjects. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Sometimes one subject needs application of concepts from another subject. There are many subjects that have concepts that complement each other. If someone have a board knowledge about academic subjects he can use the concepts from various fields more effectively. On the other hand, If you have specialized in a particualr subject you have to use that concepts only and you can't use different concepts that can enhance your application. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Five years ago, I made a website. I knew about the backend part of the website and had knowledge about databases. But, to make a website I also needed to know how to design the forntend and make it attractive. I needed to know the concept of HTML and CSS. Making a website needed integration of concepts from two different subjects. I studied these subjects also so I knew these concepts. If I would have only specialized in databases, It would have been impossible for me to make a website. The above example clearly demonstrates that having a broad knowledge helps people in using various concepts of various subjects.
Secondly, Having boarder knowledge opens more career paths. When someone has knowledge about various academic subjects there are lot of job opportunities available for them in the market whereas, a person with specialization in a particular field has to apply for a job of that field only. For instance, My brother did his engineer and after that he also did MBA. As a result, he has both technical and management knowledge. Due to this, he had more job opportunities. He applied for a position of Software developer and manager at the same company and he got the job as a manager. Now, he is working in his dream company only because he studied various subjects. Whereas, his friend who did specialization in Artificial Intelligence is still struggling to get a job as not many companies have the role for that specialization. Thus, a person can be more successful in getting a job if he is knowledgeable about more subjects.
Thirdly, It helps you find your passion. When you have
knowledge about various subjects you can find what you like and dislike, which subjects interest you the most. For instance, I had a subject about fashion designing as my minor subject. I used to like that subject a lot. So, after getting a degree in finance I went to a fashion designing school to pursue my fashion degree. Now, I work with a big fashion designer. Thus, having knowledge about fashion let me find my real interest and pursue my career in the fashion industry. Hence, knowing various fields helps with finding your real interest.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that having broader knowledge about various academic subjects is more important. This is because it helps you to integrate concepts from various subjects, provides more job opportunities, and helps to find your real interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96240601504 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.826660205 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426691729323 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5174729988 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4285714286 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88571428571 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273071779114 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075752329251 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820776725278 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154006429954 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515846639296 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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