Do you prefer to eat out or eat at home?
Nowadays, as people’s businesses have developed and people spend most of their time in their work-places, rather public or private jobs, they have just a few hours free. So, they should allocate these limited hours to their family and personal careers. Cooking food could be a real challenge forasmuch as it is very time-consuming. According to the statement, some people prefer to eat out while others prefer to cook and eat at home. Both groups have their own reasons and my attitude is near to the first one. I will explain my point of view in the following paragraphs.
In the beginning, I should mention that nothing can supplant home-cooked food's value. The nutritional value and the hygienic level that we ourselves attention them are incomparable with the food that we eat out of the home. Deposit that, we face several other challenges that should handle them. In today’s competitive world, people allocate most of the daylong to improve their business and gaining more money, so they have to utilize the services of food businesses to satisfy their basic needs, eating. Using the service of these businesses may be a bit expensive in comparison with preparing food at home. Thus, You should calculate your incomes and outcomes firstly. Then, if you can earn more money in the time that you should allocate to prepare food than the price of the food you eat in a restaurant or catering, you can choose to eat food out.
The second reason that I prefer to eat out is the varied range of food that I can experience in out of the home. It is obvious that a person can only cook limited types of food that are special in her/his area and numerous numbers of international food that are popular. I believe one of the greatest pleasures that a person can experience is a good feeling of tasting new foods. As I am concerned, many places are famous because of the special food that is special for that area. For example, I love Gilaki’s food, and obviously, I cannot cook them as well as professional chefs do, so I order the different range of Gilaki’s food from the restaurant. On the other hand, when you go to an international restaurant, you have the chance to become familiar with people from there and maybe make some international friends who can advance your thought and landscape of many important things rather than merely food.
In conclusion, I prefer to eat out to have the chance of making new friends and extend my community to improve my personality. Additionally, eating out gives you more free time to do your business and gain more money or more leisure time to relax and refresh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73245614035 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6441221537 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493421052632 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4759481955 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.761904762 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317147643316 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097706915117 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14146352951 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211429136484 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560928306226 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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