face to face communication of email and phone call?
It goes without saying that having communications is one of the most crucial needs in our life. A person has different aspects: such as personal, scientific, professional, and social. Our social life is meaning due to our people surrounding us and the way we communicate with them. Owed to technological improvement, today, people have lots of tools to facilitate life, include electronic tools that make communicating easier. Some people believe that nothing can replace the face to face communications, others stand on the other side, believing that new high-tech facilitators are deserved to supplant for in-person meetings. Personally speaking, I agree with the second group. I will illustrate my point of view in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason, today's human life is so complicated and we have lack of time. According to the different tasks we accept whether consciously or unconsciously, we are too busy to can manage all our relationships perfectly. For example, as long as I attend university, I have lots of work relevant to my field that I should do in terms of homework, projects, reports, papers, etc that are time-consuming. Additionally, I should serve as a teacher assistance in university to can earn some money. Furthermore, I have to spend some hours cooking healthy foods to stay fresh and healthy. The other daily task that deserves to mention is doing exercise to obtain physical and mental health. All these I just mentioned are a modern person's occupations that need almost all-day-long. Is there any extra time to hang out with friends or family? Definitely, it is a few free time available, but absolutely is not enough to can meet all these dear people regularly. So, electronic tools are like a miracle to help maintain relationships. We can easily create a personal account in a prestigious social media application like Facebook, Instagram, Tweeter, etc, and be aware of your friends' news. Then hang out with them virtually. In this way, you can talk with them as when as you want, no matter where are you and what are you doing. As you would figure out, twenty-first civilians much busier than the past, so need to create new terms of communication to maintain his/her social life.
The other important reason that based on that I admire social media applications is the ease and affordable ways we can utilize them. In a face to face communication, you should set a free time, then choose an appropriate cloth, do makeup, drive to the dating place, order a suitable food and all-time pretend that you are happy without can doing anything else. Moreover, of course, for all of these kinds of stuff, you should pay! Thanks to social media applications, you can save lots of money and time without disconnecting with your friends. Downloading and installing social media applications are free. you can wear easy cloth and be in every place you want and eat whatever you enjoy and chatting with your forends. In my opinion, it is the miracle of the new century. We could not make friends and still in a relationship as easy as we can today if the social media applications were not in this stage of the progressive.
In conclusion, based on the reasons mentioned above, I wholeheartedly, believe that the advantages of electronic communications and phone calls are outweighed from face to face communication. No doubt, media communications are easier and in the same place affordable. Additionally, these kinds of communications are not constraint by place, time, etc.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb mean is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'means'
Suggestion: means
...ofessional, and social. Our social life is meaning due to our people surrounding us and th...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ofessional, and social. Our social life is meaning due to our people surrounding us and th...
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Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ing social media applications are free. you can wear easy cloth and be in every pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2938.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 586.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01365187713 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06025751612 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527303754266 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 922.5 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.467395737 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7741935484 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9032258065 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35483870968 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137846888452 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335086874781 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081250738359 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13914998186 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134218452589 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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