it is important to keep your old friends than make new friends
Can you imagine life without friends? I bet no one can live their life without them, for friends are one of the most beautiful gifts one could ever get in their life. They are part of our happiness, they stick together with us during our hard times and they are partners in fun. In fact, some friends prove to be more than our family. As much as I enjoy company with my old friends, more than that, I love making new friends. In my opinion, I disagree with the claim and argue that it is the other way around mainly because of two reasons.
First, we always meet new peoples during our life and we don’t know what they are going to offer. Human life is dynamic in nature; in fact, the concept of global village of the modern day society subjects us to live and meet people from different types of society, some of those ambiences are never anticipated. For example, my father, who was an army, was deployed to an African country for the duty. I could say, he never anticipated that he would spend a half decade in the African ambience. During his stay, he made a friend from that place, a very close friend indeed. He helped my father during hard times when he was struggling to adapt in the new society. He even invited my father to his home for dinners and some special occasions. No wonder my father always talks about his wonderful friend, for he admits that his friend helped him get over depression and home sickness during his stay in the new place. The example of my father’s story highlights importance of making new friends.
Second, our preferences change with time. One of the most humorous and extrovert student might turn into a reticent and laconic one. During the course of our life, we undergo several psychological changes which might change our preferences. For example, my brother, known for his witty remarks, had a group of friends in school. Everyone was shocked how all of those humorous and naughty boys managed to get into the same group. Perhaps, their preferences of friends were similar to their nature. However, as my brother grew older, facing the hardships life put him through totally changed him. Once extrovert, now my brother barely speaks. His new friends are similar either. He once, surprisingly, confessed to me that he no longer enjoys the company of his boisterous old friends, who love drinking and singing out loud. In fact, he would rather grab a cup of coffee in a silent place and talk for hours with his new friends, who love peace.
Although, it is important to keep hold of our old friends, for they were part of our beautiful memories, it is more important to make new friends. Therefore, I disagree with the claim that it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'During'.
Suggestion: During
...t turn into a reticent and laconic one. During the course of our life, we undergo several psychologi...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hardships'' or 'hardship's'?
Suggestion: hardships'; hardship's
...r, as my brother grew older, facing the hardships life put him through totally changed hi...
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Line 9, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld friends than it is to make new ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6032388664 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37943130952 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497975708502 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5276156372 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2142857143 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294431631278 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899240855152 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12912598271 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239730928737 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161020353713 0.0645574589148 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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