it is more important to keep old friends than make new friends
Friends play an important role in everyone's life. These days, most people spend tough times in their life and must toil to reach their life requiring and afford their cost of living. Most of them feel beaten down and they can make their mind fresh and get relax time through being with their friends. Accordingly, friendship is very vital for them to change their mental conditions and get ready for their routine life. Even though, some individuals prefer to keep in touch with their old friends, maybe for the reason that they know each other properly and it is easier for them to communicate. I, personally, subscribe to this idea that it is more profitable to make new friends because of some significant reasons. Old friends will be in our common life and after passing time it will be boring to be with the same people always. As far as I am concerned, making new friends is a helpful method to abroad our perspective. We can learn somethings new from them, and get familiar with more ways of life used by them. Additionally, the ability of making new friends can strengthen our personality which helps us in many aspects.
First of all, our old friends after a while time will be like our families, I mean they will be some persons who we have gotten their knowledges and experiences. In the opposite, new friends bring us more different senses. It stands to reason that human beings are looking for varieties in their life which will reach by making new friends. We almost search to something new. Previous achievements cannot make us satisfied from our life. We can spend our leisure with old friends in a specific way shaped during our friendship period, but we are able to find new group of friends with different points of view, even with some definite characteristics those we expect from our new friends. One of the most clear reason of this desire in us, finding new friends and experiencing somethings new, arise from variable personality of human beings. We are always in changing because of changing our society, knowledges, perspective and accordingly we view life differently in each period of our life.
Second, in modern life, people cannot have assurance of their living city. It is very common to migrate from one place to another because of job, educating and so on. By seeing this, we will need to have an ability to find new friends. Some persons aren’t able to get familiar with new people and if they be in the compulsory migration, they wouldn’t make friendship easily that maybe make them depressed. I think, we always must practice to getting along with new persons and enrich this our dimension of mind, ability to get along with new persons. There are also a lot of times at which we must be with new individuals who we don’t know them a lot. In these conditions, if we cannot make friendship with others, it would be a hard time for both of us and others to spend times. We probably will be quiet and alone during these times that will make all of us boring.
All in all, by taken all of these into account, in my opinion, it is more advantageous to make new friends in comparison to keep our old friends. It helps people to be more active and broaden their perspective effectively with learning new experiences and knowledge from their new friends. And also, it makes people more capable to spend their life happy and enjoyable in every condition because they are always able to get along with new persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 480, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a specific way" with adverb for "specific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... can spend our leisure with old friends in a specific way shaped during our friendship period, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, then, while, i mean, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 52.1666666667 186% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2855.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 608.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69572368421 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53843326025 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424342105263 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9349906957 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4482758621 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9655172414 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96551724138 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284616850783 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101654490893 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882798500015 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21802199353 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763370129689 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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