Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.
The society is changing rapidly along with the development of technology. In the previous time when people only get knowledge and learn cognition from a more previously respected person, the thought was obviously highly restricted. Due to the great contribution of the inventors who created the Internet and domestic computer, we are now able to get more various and profound realization about how this society works. As a result, parents should allow their children to make their own choices instead of making choices for them.
Firstly, just as I mentioned, the internet coverage is almost the whole human world. Despite those highly restricted area and incidences, children who have the experience of surfing on the Internet can be aware of anything they wish to know. While at the same time, parents may get too busy to have time spending on the network to get up-dated information. As the consequence of it, children currently may know about the surrounding issues and the discipline of the society more precisely. Just introduce a case of myself, I am an enthusiast at anything related with computer and therefore have enough time spending on the network everyday to get the newest circumstances. At the same time, my mother, being a managerial clerk in a hospital who hardly have time to rest consequently have little time to view the news.
I do not follow her advice about the new occurrence, and she does not tell very often. That’s all because I currently even know more things than her. It’s the right time for me to make my own choice.
Secondly, learning how to think of the different side of one thing and make decision is important. Childs will all have to face the fate of leaving home and fighting for themselves. If they depend on their parents too much, by the time when nobody can nestle, they will get panic and do not know what to do next. For those who think about being accompanied with their parents for their whole life without making a single decision by their own. The only thing to tell them is that life has its randomness, one day those who have the thought will still have to make their determinative choices.
It is true that parents may have some peculiar realization of great efficiency above the choices made by children themselves, but it is the nature of life, people will have to make the choice and will have either good or bad consequence. Only by keeping trying and learning from making choices can children be awareness of significance of choices.
In conclusion, although parents sometimes diminish the waste of time and energy by making choices for the children, the importance of learning how to make own choices is still influential.
Children will have to face the problem and make choices, so I firmly believe that parents should let students make their own choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ave enough time spending on the network everyday to get the newest circumstances. At the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2354.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87370600414 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62679971236 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488612836439 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0247177294 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9545454545 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352018360754 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110879528864 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157272809756 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200598982164 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922504580872 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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