Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.
Others think access to so much information creates problems.
Which view do you agree with?
Nowadays, the Internet is an essential part of our life, a vast amount of information has been become available since the internet appeared. Some people hold the view that access to this information is very useful, others believe that this overload of information affects people adversely. Personally, I definitely think that huge amount of information provides far more advantages than disadvantages. I feel this way in two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, information makes education process more quickly and flexible. So, there is limitless amount of information from different sources that you can find in several seconds. For instance, now, I study at university and a lot of my teachers require me to examine many different articles and textbooks. So, if the internet did not exist, I would go to library and search books for long time. Moreover, university cannot guarantee that all students will receive articles and books, that teachers required because of the huge number of students. Besides, I do not need to carry many heavy books, so it makes me more flexible and healthier. Therefore, information that internet provides is very valuable for all people who are studying.
Secondly, the Internet decreases the inequality in society. People who do not have money to buy books, enroll in a university or study with private tutor, can easily find necessary information on the Internet, because the most part of information is free, therefore people that have different income receive same access to information. For instance, I wanted to learn Python a year ago, иге I have no money to acquire a course. Nevertheless, I found many different videos, books and courses that are available for free.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that studying on the Internet is one of the most crucial ways to learn something in the modern world. Because it is faster and cheaper than studying by traditional method.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ot of my teachers require me to examine many different articles and textbooks. So, if the inte...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...acquire a course. Nevertheless, I found many different videos, books and courses that are avai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8350345705 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5468417897 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329536413176 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881421492651 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920012056363 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171220411615 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957430951015 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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