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As a matter of fact, the most prominent issue is discussed among people whether the government funding should attribute the internet access improving or building a solid basis for an infrastructure of the cities through the country, particularly public transportation. Some people may hold the view of internet access improvement, while I am on the public transportation advancement due to its benefits to make an optimal living condition for the residents. My basis grounds on the solid reasons which I delve into those points for this standpoint.
To begin with, population growth is a matter of recent decades in all over the cities in the country. Some alluring aspect of lifestyle such as more job opportunities, high quality of living, more facilities in the cities, induces people to migrate to the big towns and cities. This triggers a major problem in overwhelming of population number within a city or town, and consequently, people get stuck in traffic jam for long hours to get their workplace, universities, school, or anywhere else. Indeed, the highway capacities could not respond the residents' expectation. Hence, it demands a new policy from the government to expand the lines of public transportation to resolve this problem. My own experience is the best example to illustrate it. A decade ago, we observed long queue in bus stations or we extremely felt the lack of taxi through cities, especially in the early mornings, to get our destination. But, as soon as subway constructed in the cities and this system covered the most part of the city, I can readily travel on time and there is no time wasting to be in a long line to get on a bus. As such, the government can contribute outstandingly to remove this dilemma for its people and build a comfortable life for each person in the society.
What's more, the most controversial issue is debated as a matter of air pollution. The vast majority of air pollution section belongs to the vehicle in the cities. As the more years go forward, the more cars manufactured in the countries due to a competitive environment among producers. Therefore, considering the market demanding from people, numbers of cars are used in the cities which results in problematic pollution. Moreover, the health condition of residents subjects to air pollution. The number of heart diseases, Asthma and some detrimental problem for pregnant women are made because of the area of our city's sky. This matter is strongly crucial to invest an advocating public transportation to help the city to get rid of these radical issues.
To put it all in nutshell, the importance of public transportation development should be considered by the government. Nowadays, we are facing the crowded cities which the growth of population exponentially goes further. On the other hand, air pollution is threatening our health caused by a tremendous number of cars in the streets and highways. These points hint us that our cities require government investment to assure our lifestyle's improvement.
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- Do you agree or disagree? People meet any problems in their daily life and they can solve them by themselves or with the help of their families, so the help from the government is not necessary. 76
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- Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to succeed at college or university?Tutors in university.The encouragement from family and friends.High-quality education from high school. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...ighway capacities could not respond the residents expectation. Hence, it demands a new po...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...life for each person in the society. Whats more, the most controversial issue is d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.0752688172 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08216432866 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04526278129 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529058116232 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8404227188 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.260869565 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6956521739 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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