Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay; an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?

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Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay; an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?

Professional activities like jobs play a prominent role in our lives. We often spend a lot of time with related tasks of our jobs and they have a profound effect on the quality of our lives. Some people believe that a challenging job is a better choice, however, it may have less vacation. Having an opposite viewpoint, personally, I would prefer to have a job with more vacation and it is not important that it has challenging issues. In what follows, I will scrutinize the most outstanding reasons.

First and foremost, the more vacation, the more time will be obtainable to spend with my family and friends. People often choose a job to provide enough money to have pleasure times with their families. Since the final target is having memorable times with those people who are important for us, it is not rational to spend a lot of time with related tasks of working. For instance, I had been working for an industrial company for three years before I changed my job. At that time, I was dealing with different challenges with design projects and I did not have enough time to be alongside with my wife. She always said that these conditions are boring. I decided to change my position as a quality control manager in another company. However, at the new position, I had fewer challenges but I was free for two days in a week. Consequently, I could spend more time with my wife and we allocated these times for going to central parks of our hometown. Gradually, it had remarkable effects on our emotions and we experienced fantastic days with each other. Had not I changed my job position, I would not have had such a valuable opportunity to be with my family.

A furthermore significant point is that people can allocate their vacation to personal desirable activities. There is no doubt that having free time paves the way for people to follow their interests. Those people who have challenging jobs are so busy during the day. Having hectic days prevents people to do what they are really like. Let's consider my little brother's experience. When he was a child, he was known as a painter in my family. Now, he is a dentist and most of the time he has to attend at his office with a variety of challenges with the patients. He has always been eager to continue his education as a professional painter. But his job does not allow him to pursue his interests. As a result, he experiences frustrating days and I recommended him to change his job as an assistant professor at the medical school. I am sure that this strategy will make him happy.

In brief, by taking into account all the aforementioned reasons, it seems that having a professional activity with more free time can be considered as a rational choice. However, it might have less challenging matters. Not only can they have enough time to be with their families, but also they can follow their interests. hence, it is highly recommended for everyone who wishes to have pleasure time to choose a less challenging job.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...people to do what they are really like. Lets consider my little brothers experience....
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Suggestion: Hence
...t also they can follow their interests. hence, it is highly recommended for everyone ...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, so, as to, for instance, in brief, no doubt, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66856060606 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70638505364 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452651515152 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.367315318 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5161290323 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0322580645 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32258064516 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334360290851 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905810545948 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078388700753 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226413430248 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564132260016 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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