Which one of the following qualities do you think is the most important for
determining whether a friendship between two people will last a long time?
Why?
-They always help each other in a crisis or when something goes wrong
-They have similar interests and similar views on important topics
-They trust each other completely
These days, friendship becomes more and more important in social activities and people always focus on how to maintain friendship for a long time. Generally speaking, if two people want to have a durable friendship, they need to trust each other completely.
First and foremost, as the concern of personal development, trusting each other is good for two friends to connect with each other for a long time.If people trust each other in their daily life, they can save much time to do whatever they want to do, because they can believe in each other instead of just suspicion. I can never forget my friend Eric, he always trusts me and I have the same attitude to him, so we can exchange rare resources and establish a better achievement in our life without doubt. We can tell each other the real opinion about life and are never afraid of betrayal or the release of the secrets. Eventually, we have a spellbind friendship from middle school to now, and we always change different thinking about the world.
In addition to personal enhancing, the skill to solve problems plays an important role in friendmaking, on which trust has its wonderful impact. In many friends' problem seeking and solving, trusting can reduce the negative effect of the time, they can take out what they want to do easily and have an effective way to solve the problem.While some people may believe that friends need to help each other immediately because in this way they can have a good friendship for a long time, people are busy in this modern era and may not have enough time to always help eachother.So trust in friendship becomes important because friends' trust gives confident together.
Last but not least, someone may take similar interests into account, and may point out having a similar view on major topics in lives can be a key to maintaining a long friendship. Ironicly, these days the world changes very quickly and peoples interests can be distracted and change frequently, in this turn, it is impossible for two friends to have a similar interest for a long time, not to mention they will have a totally same opinion to a question. On the other hand, there are no similar foliages in the world, and for people either, even two people are good friends, they still have their own characteristics and think in their own specific ways, so for two people, it is normal for them to have different opinions, only the trust can fix the dispatch of two friends, and give them a belt to have a durable, robust friendship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7397260274 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56591346862 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486301369863 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.738536465 48.9658058833 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.727272727 100.406767564 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8181818182 20.6045352989 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365966418858 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150254819324 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831684162706 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250561002191 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277904041934 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 11.7677419355 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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