Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People must spend some time to enjoy because it relieves our stress and makes us restore our energy to perform daily activities of life. Many people think that young people enjoy life more than older people and I am sure there will be always an opposing group for any statements in the world. In my opinion, I am part of the former group and will provide two reasons of support why I feel that way in the following essay.
To begin with, physical well being of youth makes them enjoy a lot than older people. As the time pass on, complications inside our body increases which holds us back to perform any sort of activity which involves some physical stress to the body. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Me and my father almost possess same attributes and same tastes. We do have similar interests in food choices, group activities and many more. I do not exactly remember the age, but, I can surely say since from my childhood I love chicken biryani made by my mom which was like spices hitting our nose. My father also do love it but can't enjoy eating it any more because he has acidity. So, if he eats it his stomach gets infected instantly. Moreover, my father and me love the same sport, cricket. I enjoy daily playing cricket because it makes me feel refreshes and it also maintains us in good physical conditional. Whereas, to play such a sport a lot of physical strength is required because we have to bowl, field and play with technique. Since, I am young I can play sports very easily, but, to my father he can't enjoy playing it because he got aged and his body does not support this much physical stress.
Further, young people do have a special attribute - zeal to do whatever they want without considering consequences they might face. Whereas, older people usually think about their financial position and people who depend on them, which makes them to proceed further. For instance, as I mentioned most of my attributes came from my father, we both love adventure sports and activities a lot. My father was unable to pursue his interests as a child because he comes from a very poor background. In contrast, I belong to a middle class family because of my father job, but not to the extent of upper class. When I wanted to go Manali, a beautiful place in dehradun I asked my father to give money without a second thought. My father immediately provided me with enough bucks to pay for the travel and activities like river rafting, para gliding which are considered as risky sports. I did them because, I do not think of consequences and money. Whereas, my father though interested in all the stuff, he thought by financial affordability and children because it is quite risky to perform these kind of activities in older age.
In conclusion, I think young people enjoy more than old people. Not only they are physical fit but also their zeal and carelessness to accomplish a task irrelevant of consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...our nose. My father also do love it but cant enjoy eating it any more because he has...
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Line 2, column 690, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing it any more because he has acidity. So, if he eats it his stomach gets infected in...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ports very easily, but, to my father he cant enjoy playing it because he got aged an...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...ports very easily, but, to my father he cant enjoy playing it because he got aged an...
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Line 3, column 1085, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...en because it is quite risky to perform these kind of activities in older age. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2424.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62595419847 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53410371387 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507633587786 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 774.9 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4617884607 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2307692308 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.03846153846 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217874903051 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654933876374 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092719683288 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175841537286 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910516770889 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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