peary's journey
The reading claims that there are some supports about the truth of Peary’s claim in regard to reaching the North Pole .however, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and prepares some evidence to refute them all.
First, the author argues that the national geographic society put a committee to evaluate equipment and records of Peary’s claim. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that although the National geographic committee did research, it was not an ideal research.it was objective, since the committee member were friends of Peary who cost a large amount of money to fund his trip. Indeed, this investigation took two days and Peary himself was one member of investigators. Hence, it was biased and was not base of truth.
Second, the reading passage holds the view that a recent expedition supports that Peary’s claim is true about 37days to reach the pole. On the contrary, the professor underlines the idea that Avery’s journey was different than Peary’s one. It is true it took 37days similarly Peary did, However, in this trip, there were not support of food and dropped from an airplane. In addition, Avery did it in the favor weather condition that was different than Peary’s trip. So, it does not support Peary’s claim.
Third, the reading asserts that some photos of Peary’s which took in the pole, endorse his claim. on the contrast, the speaker dismisses the idea due to the fact that there was no shadow which showed the exact position of the sun. Peary’s photo took 100 years ago which was unfocused one. Also, this photo faded and worn during this period. Therefore, it is hard to find that this if this photo was taken in the north polar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...aim in regard to reaching the North Pole .however, the lecturer finds all the idea...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...that Avery's journey was different than Peary's one. It is true it took 37...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...or weather condition that was different than Peary's trip. So, it does not supp...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ch took in the pole, endorse his claim. on the contrast, the speaker dismisses the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, hence, however, if, second, similarly, so, therefore, third, in addition, in regard to, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63702992805 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7297920392 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359513344962 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145264129253 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130942100159 0.0662205650399 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217174587239 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133308237638 0.0443174109184 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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