Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
In today's fast-changing world, modern's lifestyle in one of the greatest concerns of human beings and also is inextricably intertwined with their lives. Nowadays, there are the numbers of people who hold the view that using the preapared food can be a convenient way to improve the productivity of a life, however, others are of the opinion that it is not true. As far as I am concerned, the disadvantages of using restaurant foods substantially outweigh those of the home's food for quite a few reasons, two monumental of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first exquisite reason coming to mind is that the health is a matter that cannot be proved about the restaurant's foods. Additionally, we are not aware of the ingredients of this meals although, they invariably have a delicious taste. To be more specific, one of my best friend whom I have known 5 years got a bterrible disease by using this food, actually he said that he ordered a meal that spreaded a nice smell but, after eating that he was passing out and his wife call to ambulance, in whole he staied in hospital about two month.
Last but not the least is that using restaurant food make the life's costs increased. Apart from that people try earn much money, they try do not wast it eeasily and use it in convenient ways like investment, etc. To illustrate my point, personally, I aleady calculated the monthly costs of the restaurant's food and the austonishing results clearly showed that I had to spend half of my gained moey to that.
To sum up, even though there are many vivid factors that describes the advantages of the restaurant's food but, the mentioned reasons are the most important one. The advice that my father always says me is that the easily life style is not far-reaching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, so, apart from, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73462783172 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76605332458 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614886731392 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1226020123 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123596537696 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413561805892 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303868867696 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063854667757 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289758641237 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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