a nation should require all its students to study the same curriculum until they enter college
The author here says that a nation wide standard curriculum must be followed by the students before entering college. Such a proposition seems very promising as there are a number of benefits associated with such a vision.
A standard curriculum will result in a culture among students of high school and secondary education where they are at a standard level of prerequisite and necessary knowledge before going to college. This will leave no student at any diadvantage by any means by bringing them to atleast one basic level. Students from all parts of the society will recieve the same fundamental education. Such a system will remove any sort of bias which otherwise exists among different schools. For example, this will ensure that a student from a moderately funded school is atleast offered the same curriculum as provided by the majorly funded schools in the country. This will leave the less priviledged students at no disadvantage before going to college as compared to there other competitors who are much more effluent and can afford much poised schools.
Such a Standard curriculum will also help the authorities to design entrance exams and other test much more efficiently. As creating and fixating curriculum for an entrance exam is very hectic due to various curriculums in existence. A Standard curriculum will therefore encourage better test structures and much more sophistication by means of contents of the tests. Considering the other counterpart appoach, some students tend to feel underpriveleged when syllabus for entrance exams seems to favour a particular curriculum.
All the other curriculums will be eliminated resulting in one single body responsible for designing the curriculum instead of numerous smaller committes. Such a body will be able to follow a much more hollistic appoach in it's operation and not concentrating on a particular aspect like region and also other penuriouos relations. Therefore managing a single national curriculum will also be easier.
As discussed above a national curriculum for the country for all students until college will be a much more positive approach. Provided, the council responsible and deciding on such curriculums is wise enough to have a nation wide and broad perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, therefore, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32681564246 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97029313424 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511173184358 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1067850239 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.176470588 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231351525155 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824957202959 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607708104018 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13928832596 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495194417578 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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