Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams,e.g:football.However, some think that it is better to play individual games e.g: swimming, etc.Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is quite a debatable topic whether to play games which are played as a team or as an individual. Different people have their own views on this, but I totally agree with the people who say that it is better to play sports which are played in teams. I will explain the reasons for this in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, any sport whether it is played in team or individual help them to stay fit and healthy and moreover it helps in building concentration and provide relaxation for every individual from his daily routine work. Apart from having the above advantages, the games which are played in teams add an additional benefits i.e it teaches them team management and how to work together with peer groups. It not only teaches them how to work with peer groups but also help to build leadership qualities and teaches us how to handle a situation under pressure. It also helps to build friendly relationships with different kinds of people with diversifying mentality.
On the other hand playing games which are to be played as an individual don’t help an individual to build above stated additional benefits. One positive thing about a game played in single is that the person is solely responsible for his loss unlike team play where entire team is blamed for the loss. This makes individual to play more carefully and concentrated due to fear that he be pointed out for the loss exclusively.
On the whole, I would like to conclude saying that it is always more advantage to play games in team rather than individual. However, both are beneficial to the individual and it all depends on type of the game that he/she is interested in, that decides whether the game is played in team or as an individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'add a benefits'.
Suggestion: add a benefits
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...h are played in teams add an additional benefits i.e it teaches them team management and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is played in team or as an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72185430464 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64167030476 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506622516556 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1663208837 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282182752279 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121316894607 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836527457306 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201665921689 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710754274067 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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