Television has two roles: to inform and to entertain. Explain which of these roles you see as more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, the role of the television in humans lives has changed a lot. Some people believe that the main role of the television is to transfer news, while others argue that the main role of the television has changed dramatically since the beginning of the 21st century, and most people are watching their televisions to entertain. This essay will discuss how the role of television has been altered from informing news to entertain people.
People these days watch televisions to have fun rather than to obtain news. People prefer obtaining news from the internet these days, thus, using the television is for entertaining. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that 90% of American people use their televisions to have fun, they prefer watching National Geographic rather than watching Fox News. Therefore, it seems clear that television has become a source for entertainment, and subsequently, using it to observe news has become negligible.
These days, people are working for longer hours, so, at the end of working day, they prefer watching a comedy movie rather than to listen to disgusting news. Relaxation could be obtained through laying down on the couch and in front of television. Recent study, which was conducted in UK, has shown that 96% of British people are looking to watch drama on their televisions rather than watching some news. Thus, the major role of the television is to entertain.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why people are choosing watching their televisions for entertainment rather than watching news. Working for longer hours and attractive programs are the major factors. In my opinion, television offers a wide variety of programs which could be more beneficial than watching a boring news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to watch'.
Suggestion: to watch
...essay discussed why people are choosing watching their televisions for entertainment rat...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'boring news'.
Suggestion: boring news
... could be more beneficial than watching a boring news.
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...beneficial than watching a boring news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17586206897 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6946659779 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465517241379 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8630948965 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126542661594 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631119970439 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496107023838 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903738784037 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385234356615 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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