Do you agree or disagree? People meet any problems in their daily life and they can solve them by themselves or with the help of their families, so the help from the government is not necessary.
We confront so many different types of problems and issues in our daily life. Some are resolved readily by our solution and the help of our families, however, some part of those matters needs more attention from a high level of a power. In my opinion, some problems conclusively requires the government' concern due to the broad appeal of the consequence of the matter. I feel this way and explore my logics in the following.
From a general aspect of view, we know that some problems are in common for a vast majority of people in a country. In other words, not only do individuals suffer from the specific problem and are not able to solve it by their own help, but also it would impact on a society which the reflection of the problem would be arose in a detrimental feature through a community. To illustrate it, I can point out the foremost and concerning problem of unemployment, particularly the well-educated persons. This problem cannot be solved by each one and requires certain policy to provide job opportunities, which is in hand of the government to invest on young and ingenious ones to prevent brain drain in the country. We observe so many potential individuals are ought to immigrate till find their own real position in their life. Therefore, the government is responsible for building factories or allocate a substantial budget to make a better situation for people's life. This is not a simple problem, rather a complicated tie which can be opened by a logical mindset and policy from the government.
From another perspective, a problem can brings about an inevitable disturbance through a country which needs an interference by the government and people are not able to manage this problem. For instance, when rebellions are making turbulence and mess in the country, in fact, the government come to the field and organize everything in a political way. Furthermore, such a dangerous problem requires a particular organization to retrieve the peace to the country. Indeed, when the security of a country is threatened, the first shortcoming would be applied by the government which is the prominent power in each country. As such, people cannot help solve this critical matter.
All in all, I believe that all people challenge their own specific problems. We absolutely can manage those problems which are individuality while some of them are not controllable by persons and requires government's help. Government owns an authority to provide welfare and safety for the nation. So, it should try to make a comfortable society with solving problems which are pervasive such as unemployment or providing the best security for people's life.
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- Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to succeed at college or university?Tutors in university.The encouragement from family and friends.High-quality education from high school. 73
- Do you agree or disagree? People meet any problems in their daily life and they can solve them by themselves or with the help of their families, so the help from the government is not necessary. 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
We confront so many different types of problems and issues in our dai...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...From another perspective, a problem can brings about an inevitable disturbance through...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a political way" with adverb for "political"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...me to the field and organize everything in a political way. Furthermore, such a dangerous problem ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01126126126 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93427154103 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502252252252 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2402975708 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297964550484 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866277388383 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528842127874 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184629151069 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504831501699 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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