You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr. Hu,
How are you? I Hope you’re doing well. It’s been a long time after I graduated.
I recently received an offer letter from Google. It’s a software engineer position, required a lot of programming and design which is very interesting to me. The department I’m going to be in is a research group focusing on autonomous driving, it’s the best group existed in Google.
This job is a dream job even before I going into the university. It can bring me into the cutting-edge reasearch group with whom I can disscuss my idea on improving the performance of AI. It’s very interesting, isn’t it.
Google required a letter of reference from my former teacher, this let me though about you. You are the best teacher I met in my college. Whenever you have time, could you please write that letter for me?
It’s best to including the scores I got, the programs I finished and your personal comments to me. When you finished this letter you can send it back to my address.
Thank you very much.
Best regards,
Di
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 37, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... This job is a dream job even before I going into the university. It can bring...
^
Line 10, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ished and your personal comments to me. When you finished this letter you can send i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85245901639 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74374626552 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3351908451 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.5 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4375 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193676803693 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656057710355 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735373214132 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987277939346 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940895805096 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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