Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world
Nowadays with the development of technology, there is no doubt that green energy specially solar energy is becoming more and more popular. Because of its advantages, human use solar energy too much.
There are 3 main advantages make solar energy is becoming more popular in many countries. Firstly, solar energy which is the natural source is not limited. The light which is collected from the sun to cook, produce electric. Sun always being here, we do not need to worry about problem have no light. Another advantage is solar energy does not pollute environment. Light from the sun shines on Earth every day and it does not make any problems for environment. Finally, solar energy does not spend too much money. We just spend money to buy equipment move the sunlights to electric. We can replace natural resource by solar energy.
Apart from advantages, solar energy has some disavantages. Solar energy which people want to use must have light from the sun. In winter, the light of the sun is weakest, almost all equipment can not act. Solar energy is not profitable, no one and no machine can touch and take it to sale or exchange . Finally, solar energy is easy to cause explosion. The weather which is sunny is dry, this is a conditions make forest fire.
Green energy, special solar energy has high value in protect environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: being always
... the sun to cook, produce electric. Sun always being here, we do not need to worry about pro...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...an touch and take it to sale or exchange . Finally, solar energy is easy to cause ...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a condition' or simply 'conditions'?
Suggestion: a condition; conditions
... weather which is sunny is dry, this is a conditions make forest fire. Green energy, specia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, apart from, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8384279476 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4689221453 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554585152838 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9151725894 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5555555556 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7222222222 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360491190461 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130741788594 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135484915024 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249986836436 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106143762466 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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