It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often discussed that the possibility of hiring young generation to the university placement. Many people believe that, forthcoming youth would have the capability to manage such a higher standard of authority in proper way. However, the advancement of technology and trend would be managed by middle aged people rather than the elder. Likewise, the experienced old age people could lead the association in spectacular way. So, I agree to recruit young generation to such adore position without changing the elders unless retire by the help of valid exams and interviews.
Firstly, marking and the targeting score would be play an important role in placement. Rather considering the scheduled system, government must include the knowledge and ability to overcome any stressful situation as in charge. By the virtue of that, scholars can accumulate proper position and they can lead to higher achievements with their ability and versatile nature of youthfulness like an example of the Canadian parliament is filled with mostly young members with vivid acknowledgement. Moreover, authority to avoid giving placement by the support of politicians, or other higher rank persons, instead of that, conduct strict written and oral test to become a university member. For example, allotment list to be published in India as rank holder to be placed as a result of marks and performance.
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Firstly, universities plays an indispensable position in our society in terms of education and morale. Every students or academic holders life style and attitude towards the society is determined by the guidance of such educational institutions. For instance, the well arrangements of syllabus and including the appropriate themes to be teach would make an enhancement of academic level with youngsters. Furthermore, new generation can understand the feelings of their overcoming people than old age staffs. Set up guidelines and way of teaching of youth members would have flourish the attendance of classes in some extent.
In conclusion, it if often applicable in any university to accommodate youth members to cherish and develop the system. But it would be processed by strict curriculum and corruption free management, if it is pass the target which would have a tremendous changes in the field of educational boards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38842975207 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03991678682 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7570360136 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815876431762 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027532032372 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361671992517 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469056167947 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161568540656 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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