ESSAY: In some countries the amount of garbage has become an increasing problem. What are the causes of these problems? What can be done to solve this problem?
Over 5.6 Million tons of plastic waste is produced by India alone annually, and globally that number can skyrocket. Too much dependency on plastic items and lack of knowledge of its harmful impact at rural context are major reasons behind proliferation rubbish. There are number of solutions that exist, which we will also discuss in this essay.
Firstly, people are using too much plastic products and other wasteful things, that is difficult to recycle. Nowadays, food items or drinkable items are also available in plastic plates and cups. This means that we are adding a lot of wastages to landfill sites and oceans. Furthermore, this scraps falls in the sea and becomes a deterrent to amphibious creatures. It also affects the drainage system by blocking the water flow. Secondly, lack of awareness are rural area is a big concern, countryside people do not generally have more knowledge of how adversely it can impact our land, due to limited education.
Nevertheless, the solutions are always present for any obstacles. The preponderant measure of this garbage waste would be to taboo the use of it or impose heavy penalty on using plastic made items, which cannot be recycled. By doing this the public will automatically be recosted to use the safer and better alternative options. Another solution can be to give a tax rebate to the businessmen, who are using recycled products. It will encourage them to give away usable bags or plastic items free to the public in order to gain maximum tax benefits. The more the use of the reusable material the lesser the rubbish will. For example, in my hometown, the municipal council has introduced hefty concession on municipal taxes for people, who use cloth bags instead of plastic bags.
In conclusion, there are many concerns like lack of awareness and too much dependency on plastic made items is the reason for the ramping use of plastic. By imposing the heavy tax or complete ban of such items and giving some kind of tax rebate to the citizen for recycled products this war again wastage can easily concur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94842406877 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60210731362 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555873925501 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3277112169 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773508953474 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265779569483 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302096256383 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487258392353 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00777813241145 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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