In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Despite the high increase of crops each year, many people in this world starve. Lack of birth control policy and insufficient collection of tax from rich people contribute to this problem highly.
Sufficient amount of crops and vegetables is produced to feed all the people in the world, though many people cannot afford to buy these for all their family members. In many third-world countries, for example, Africa and Congo, there are many extremely poor people who have no fixed earnings. These people may feed only one or two children, but surprisingly, most of them have 8-10 children at home, resulting in them go hungry. Besides, governments of many third-world countries focus less on collecting high amount of tax from rich. Consequently, businessmen can easily evade high amount of tax. If sufficient amount of tax is collected, this money can be spent on poor people so that they do not starve.
To alleviate this problem, first of all, governments of poor countries should introduce a strong birth control policy where poor people are allowed to take more children if only they can afford. Encouraging them to use contraceptives will be helpful here. Besides, government should focus on increasing their education level as educated people can easily understand the value of family planning. Secondly and most importantly, government should ensure that plentiful amount of tax is collected from elite people. Strong punishment for evading tax should be introduced and tax authorities should be given more power to investigate cases. As a result, high amount of tax will be collected which can be used to develop the lives of the needy people.
In conclusion, the problem of hunger seems fierce. But by introducing an effective family planning and strengthening the tax collection from affluent people, this problem can be reduced significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25418060201 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82295248787 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.66546827 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233413639026 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086376519551 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499563049442 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168852405911 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365303207564 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.