Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
It is fact that modern life is very complex because of the revolution of the technology. For that people have always been striving to equip themselves with the essential skills that would help them to thrive and succeed. Some people believe that young people should not require abilities to be plan and organized. However, as far as The chief reason for that is young people have more abilities than others. I concerned, I believe that youth should have ability to plan and organize in this modern life. Let me shed light on my perspective in the following paragraph.
As I mentioned young have more strength physically and mentally. They can grasp complex technology easily. For the young generation it is effortless to live in modern complex world. As matter of the fact world became more complicated for the people who lack these skills. If they learn to plan and organize their schedule they can achieve success in their life without worrying about result.
Secondly, youth can achieve many if they organize their plans. As Abraham Lincoln told " if I have 60 minutes to cut down the tree, I will take 40 minutes to sharp the ax and 20 minutes to cut the tree." Plans are just like sharping ax. Youth should organize to achieve their success soon in life.
Another most noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned is that by gaining the skill of plans and organization, youth can save their time and money too. When they face any difficulties in their life if they have planned about the circumstances then they know the merits and demerits of that situation, also they can solve the problems without being panic in complex situation. Research also show that students who study who stick to their plans for study they do not get stressed in exam get good results in exam compare to students who do not have plans.
Let's put it in to a nut shell, in the modern life youth should learn skills to plan and organize because young people are the future of the world if they will be organized in their life than world will become best organized in all fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73278236915 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37559184629 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482093663912 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8166044674 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376364897024 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129035667194 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992400110181 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222371424499 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163898973308 0.0645574589148 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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