Violence in the media promote violence in society. To what extent do you agree?
Over the few decades, number of violence has become increasingly serious issue in many countries around the world. It is sometimes argued that one of the most sector lead to the increasing social violence is violent media. From my standpoint, I agree in part with this view and I will offer some reasons to clarify this stance.
On the one hand, large amount of information in the internet are not reliable source such as encouraging people to struggle against the government by posting statements on the public website. Although there are unrealistic, the part of citizens believe completely in what they say. Some of them have violent actions to fight for fair. For example, many people had strictly reactions when China was allowed to rent land in Vietnam by the government and populations used violence as the best method to object because of the fear of hydration in he future.
In addition, some of social violence can certainly come from people behavior. After stressful day, almost workers and students tend to get easily uncontrollable, especially when having mistaken situations and they frequently use violence to tackle the problems. In my experience, if the two transportation collide in unintentional, their owners will solve it in violence by using the action rough. Actually, that are not effective way and have no result after that.
From the reasons mentioned above, I believe that violence in the media can gain the social violence rise but there are also increased by other factors in daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 540, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...object because of the fear of hydration in he future. In addition, some of social violence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07171314741 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74678009243 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0291311137 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211419681637 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711894956671 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585710385567 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133869931763 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495184768492 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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