Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?
While it is no doubt true that riding a bicycle is good for not only health but also environment. There are so many people don’t choose to use bicycle as a main transport at some reasons. Therefore, this habit change should be advocated to raise the bicycle usage.
Riding a bicycle is not the 1st choice of transports because people have other priority needs. First, the most obvious reason is that people, who are busy, need fast-moving vehicles, such as: automobile, motorbike, train or subway, which help them save time in transportation. Second, some people want to show off and get attention, and transport is chosen as a way to communicate about their wealth.
However, riding a bicycle also brings us many benefits and people should be encouraged to use it more. First of all, people may all aware about benefits of riding a bicycle, such as how it helps to improve their health and protect environment as it doesn’t produce exhaust fumes, but we need to strongly communicate about it and make it more relevant to people’s live to really catch their attention. Then, we should give people a chance to start and maintain the habit of using bicycle by encouraging the bicycle clubs or organizing the bicycle races. The real experience of feeling improved health and having surrounded community will keep people enjoying riding bicycle.
In conclusion, the direct and indirect benefits of using a bicycle are certain and obvious, and I believe bicycle will soon become a main transport by our efforts to communicate and giving people real experience.
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- Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport? 61
- IELTS Writing task 1.0 11
- IELTES Writing Task 1.1 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'main transport'.
Suggestion: main transport
...ple don't choose to use bicycle as a main transport at some reasons. Therefore, this habit ...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'main transport'.
Suggestion: main transport
... and I believe bicycle will soon become a main transport by our efforts to communicate and givin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01526717557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73926700182 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4763852453 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428332206973 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177461831649 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144692762514 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266540825439 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818622166099 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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