Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
The increasing number of obese people has become a major issue in many countries today. This essay will list several reasons behind this phenomenon and some actions that can be taken to tackle this problem.
The reasons for overweight are simple; it is either caused by the overconsumption of food or caused by the lack of physical activities. In other words, people only gain weight when the calories intake exceed those burned by the body. And between these two reasons, diet is much more important exercise because the body burns a certain level of energies to keep the heart beating and the organs functioning, regardless of the level of exercise. People today have easy access to various food, such as the cafe, supermarket, gas station or even vending machines, resulting people eating an excess amount of calories without knowing. Moreover, the lack of knowledge about nutrients is another reason responsible for obesity. Otherwise, one can snack all day without feeling satisfied and full that will result in the excess intake of food.
There are several methods to reduce obesity within a nation. Firstly, increasing the number of activities that individual do on the daily basis. Holding a competition, adding extra P.E. lessons in school or requiring employers to provide mandatory workout times are all great ways to allow people to move more. Secondly, education on the nutrients. People need to understand basic food composition in order to eat a balanced, healthy, and fulfilling meal. Lastly, imposing an additional tax on fast food while incentivizing those who buy fresh and healthy food can allow people to afford a quality healthy style with little costs.
To summarize, obesity is caused by the insufficient exercise or by the excess food. And the best way to reduce the obesity problem is to change these two aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calories'' or 'calorie's', 'calory's'?
Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
...words, people only gain weight when the calories intake exceed those burned by the body....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12251655629 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64132370962 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 106.607317073 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 283.868780488 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3980316797 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161541893586 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434954517264 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568472101741 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102415524438 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827822305322 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 40.7170731707 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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