The real talent of musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several decades, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
The author claims that real talent of musicians is accurately assessed after there death .So, that their fame does not interfere with honest assessment.According to me, there are various factors which plays in the quality and popularity of music.
According to critics, there are many musicians which were overrated or underrated in their time.This holds so because quality of music is totally judged on the way it appeals masses.
Firstly,if a musician has become popular then there will be definitely some talent in that musician to come to that peak of his or her career.So,it leads us to the point that there is actual talent in musician or that musician would not have came to this point in his or her career.As for instance,musicians which were popular in last generation were liked or celebrated by different type of following mainly these followings were based on different type of genres.As the quality of music is greatly a factor of perspective,there might be some cases where certain people or critics do not understand the hype for popular musicians.
Secondly,as the author suggests that real talent of musician is assessed after generation have passed after his death in order of that his or her fame does not play any role in honest assessment.This statement of author holds true for the musician which were not as much as celebrated on the basis of their fame or vice versa. as the history repeats itself,so in the case of genres and music . But in this case it repeats itself with much more hype.
In sum,music is a very different type of art. It becomes popular to the one who find it relatable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86231884058 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87878465902 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.374589625 60.3974514979 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.75 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36039404939 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128617225488 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132907404737 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186080704847 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130591947381 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.