Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some, speaking a foreign language only enables people to get a job or travel in another country, as the rest might be done in their native language and the efforts used for learning another language for other purposes than work and travel can be spent on other valuable things. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that knowing a foreign language has numerous advantages, since this can promote education and bring closer to other cultures.
speaking a foreign language is a must for the majority, as this is an important part of getting proper education. it is obvious that there are not enough academic materials in numerous languages. For instance, while studying at medical school I had limited access to professional books and articles in my native language. Therefore, being able to read in another language triggered my academic performance. Thus, people will apply themselves more, when they have knowledge about other languages.
another positive aspect of speaking a foreign language is the opportunity of integrating with one’s favorite culture. people will be able to do various activities such as watching movies, reading books, and so much more.For example, my cousin is a huge fan of indian movies and music, and this encouraged her to learn hindi. Now she does not only watch movies in hindi, but also has many indian friends. Hence, people enjoy getting to know another culture with the help of original rather than interpreted languages
In conclusion, it was shown that speaking a foreign language can play a significant role in education and globalization. However, some believe that this skill is only vital in traveling and working, as learning a foreign language requires lots of energy that can be used in more useful spheres and knowing the native language is enough for doing the rest of the activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13057324841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65351610395 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8940401181 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262777661618 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891264369786 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723433716281 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172461370631 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065104289115 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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