A friend, who lives in another country, has invited to you come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– thank him/her for the invitation
– explain why you cannot come
– give him/her your other news
Dear David,
I’m writing with regards to your invitation to come vacation with you this auturm.
I really do appreciate the kind gesture because it shows you value our friendship despite our quarrels and misunderstandings.
Unfortunately, I’ll be unable to come over to Iceland due to busy work schedules. Let me explain in detail. My company recently won some juicy training contracts with tight deadlines. If you remember clearly, I’m the only graphics designer here and I am required to edit all training slides. As at the last count I had sixty pending slides to be submitted next month. With this situation, I have no chance of going on an holiday this year. Frustrating i must say.
Could you let me know if you want me to come next year? If yes, i have two dates in mind .The first is the 25th of March reason being that I would love to attend the annual winter games slated for that date. Also, i am considering 30th June during the summer to explore the Icelandic country side with you and your brother. Any of those dates is fine by me.Do let me know,via text, which one you prefer.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your friend,
Femi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear David, I'm writing with regards to your in...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m required to edit all training slides. As at the last count I had sixty pending s...
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Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...situation, I have no chance of going on an holiday this year. Frustrating i must s...
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Line 7, column 463, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng on an holiday this year. Frustrating i must say. Could you let me know if ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day this year. Frustrating i must say. Could you let me know if you want me to ...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t year? If yes, i have two dates in mind .The first is on the 25th of March reason...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...year? If yes, i have two dates in mind .The first is on the 25th of March reason be...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nter games slated for that date. Also, i am considering 30th June during the sum...
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Line 9, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Do
...other. Any of these dates is fine by me.Do let me know,via text, which dates you p...
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Line 9, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , via
...these dates is fine by me.Do let me know,via text, which dates you prefer. I look...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to hearing from you. Your friend, Femi.
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you. Your friend, Femi.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57024104964 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8258791129 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254180551777 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833535690728 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816113239166 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13579115035 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850687570305 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.