The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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...entation the rural area in 1930 and 2010 .It gives two years. To sum up,the sal...
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...tation the rural area in 1930 and 2010 .It gives two years. To sum up,the salie...
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...d 2010 .It gives two years. To sum up,the salient feature seems that in 1930 adol...
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...n 1930 adolescent most used the farmland .Thus,in 2010 dozens have built new build...
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...oving a quick glance on the illustration,in 1930 primitive people would used the fa...
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...ople would used the farmland. Therefore,it was very big demand.Thus,shops and gard...
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...land. Therefore,it was very big demand.Thus,shops and gardens nearby reduced relate...
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...e person used house. On the flip side,in 1930 and 2010 was not be changed .For i...
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...side,in 1930 and 2010 was not be changed .For instance,river stoke,post office,key...
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...nd 2010 was not be changed .For instance,river stoke,post office,key houses,primary sc...
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...ed .For instance,river stoke,post office,key houses,primary school and bridge.Howeve...
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...tance,river stoke,post office,key houses,primary school and bridge.However,in 1930 large...
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...houses,primary school and bridge.However,in 1930 large house replaced in 2010 retir...
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... house replaced in 2010 retirement home.The gardens had been climbed in 2010.Hence,...
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...me.The gardens had been climbed in 2010.Hence,the built upsurge rather than shops bom...
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...e gardens had been climbed in 2010.Hence,the built upsurge rather than shops bomb in...
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... upsurge rather than shops bomb in 2010.As far as,gardens did not rise in 2010.So,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68702290076 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2925992346 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717557251908 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.68697065 43.030603864 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.0 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 5.23603664747 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126215070844 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665980930577 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332268457262 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669064167043 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331368599419 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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